Inspired by twilight Clandestine thoughts Seek to roam free To howl at the moon To soar the thermals To dance on stars Run rampant oh spirit Deny the gravity of earth Climb the heavens Chase the clouds Find passions portal Enjoy Eros embrace Partake in pools of pleasure Allow the ambiance of love To intoxicate the night
My favorite time of day, Eileen, the twilight, just as the sun's setting and the dark opens her beauty overhead. This is beautiful; well done! So soft, so serene...thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
You and Ed are at opposite poles, he's doing dawn, your doing dusk..
Aiming and reaching the stars, so serene...
Twilight can truly be inspiring, as is this poem and this marvelous picture, Tiger Lily.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Nicely done, Eileen. I see that same twilight with images of dancing, flying things silhouetted against the half light, half dark. But that's just me, YOU on the other hand see the big picture, you always seem to see that.
When I looked at that image I thought to myself, "How can anyone write a poem to compare to the incredible beauty of the photograpy?" And then I read your poem and knew, you can, Eileen. ~ Sara
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Aiming and reaching the stars, so serene...
Ch'erie lolol
full of beauty and truth!
just beautiful ~ rhonda
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