His Tenebrous Thoughts (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 29, 2006

very effective reaction to the depths of darkened thoughts ...

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on August 29, 2006

for lethal decisions
have no visions <------ ADOPT ME!!!! LOL! You are FABULOUS!!!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2006

2nd stanza says it all, Eileen! Wow!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Stark dark offering Sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Eileen

Only you know the full extent and depth of your despair,.. and yet hope,.. that exists and burns ever so bright, in the innermost recesses of your heart..

A very pugnacious and courageous write of brave honesty and clarity

Tell it as it is Eileen !

And what a whopper of a supernatural graphic..

Love

Peter

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

WOW, Eileen,

This reaches in and touches deep...excellent poetry, my friend!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Powerful thought provoker you have penned here, Eileen; terrific stuff! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Sounds like someone very human
very deep
you must be a good friend to see all his sides..........
yet still all him friend
good poem all around.....very interesting.........
you are an observer ET
pax Anita

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

The depth of this required me to rope myself off as I plunged into its depths. Great pen Eileen

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Wonderful rhyme scheme and rhythm within this piece.. short clipped lines lend themselves well to the spirit of the piece and make quite an impact.

Myrna

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Sometimes, no matter what we have or what is presented to us, everything seems to slip into darkness or become negative energies. These are the times to renew the spirit, clear out the nasty spider webs that clog up the gloomy places where we have packed away our troubles and draw in the holy, healing light to illuminate those dank holding areas. Negativity only breeds more negativity, so the time is now to do a little spiritual house cleaning, open the heart to the beauty that surrounds us and take a moment to count our blessings. Lots to ponder in this excellent poem, Eileen.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

Quite a 'dark' poem for you, Tiger Lily. I hope the 'light' breaks through soon.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

There is a lantern
but no light burns
there is a mind
vacant and blind

Oh how I can relate to the above thoughts..alas..such is the darkness at this moment..
Exceptional write..
I saved this one..Thankyou dear friend..

Vesna

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2006

My, my, we're in a bad mood tonight!!! If your thoughts are so esoteric, they will remain hidden in you. But we all need each other's help. Lovely dark poem, as I love them.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on August 27, 2006

"cause and effect
hard to detect
when only bitter
is left in the litter"

Potently powerful Eileen! Awesome write.
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by RM Green

Reviewed on August 27, 2006

How dark life sometimes becomes when we choose the wrong path... You have stated so precisely and dramatically the state of mind devastaion brings... you are a master wordsmith! BRAVO!

RM Green

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2006

Wow, powerful..Your mind writes these faboulous pieces, Eileen..The imagination is tremendous..God what a mind you really do possess....

Eternal Love, Dove

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 27, 2006

no one will attest
did what is best
for lethal decisions
have no visions

Oh but we are the victims of our tongues most times.
Sus!! You show great diplmacy when getting your point across.
Love,
Susan...had a great trip to Hotlanta!