The amber moon caressed our bodies as on the beach we lay The blanket wrinkled full of sand from our erotic foreplay In loves sweet lazy afterglow we listen to the oceans flow Content in our relaxed embrace reluctant to leave our favorite place Sounds of waves as they come ashore seduce us with their allure We feel symbiosis in the pull of the tides tingling on our insides With the evening chill we must depart,but the ocean remains within our hearts Until once again in the noon day sun we return to where we became one
This reminds me so much of the scene with Burt Lancaster and Deborah Kerr in the film "From Here to Eternity". I could vision the two lovers in your poem on that same beach...beautifully romantic!
Eileen, this is a sensual delight! Making love by the ocean ... one of the most seductive images ever! Oh, and the photo is perfect for this poem.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2006
Nice, nice nice. The ending is just gorgeous...I guess it's something about the cycle...completion...the unification of souls...that I have a soft spot for.
Love from
kay.
Regis
Got to love it....like I use to say to Peggy....oceanic perfection!!
Love Tinka
The rhythm of the ocean is the rhythm of life as it was meant to be so everything that falls into that rhythm is blessed.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Micke
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Myrna
Rusty
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
Love,
CJ
an excellent write
smooth romantic piece
thanks for sharing ...Eileen
Love & Peace
William