Fabulous sustained metaphor, Eileen. Positively opulent writing. You are wealthy beyond measure in that which you hold most dear. The orb and sceptre are yours! :)) LOL Kate xx
Oh, I've thought that some poets are "Ruby Flames"
...and a "panorama of natures views
Pearl like prolific prose, flows"...it sure does Eileen!
A beauty of a gem, this fine poem is full of vibrancy!
Wow wisdom words of a poetic Jewels
Written by a poetess possessing a poetic muse
With the brilliance of a diamond!!
Outstanding Jeweled of a poem!
Love Peace and Joy to you always..Yolie
ET--
What can I say bu "exquisite!" That's actually an understatment because I don't believe I've read many poems on this site that have BOTH metaphors AND similes. Excellent expressive write! WOW!!
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Happy Fourth to you and yours; stay safe and have FUN!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
GORGEOUS perfection in sparkling lines! Well done, my (((friend))).
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
Well done.
Georg
cheers,
carolyn
Amor
Be safe,
Karen
Love,
Susan
Thanks for sharing.
Patricia
So you have Aladins cave!
...and a "panorama of natures views
Pearl like prolific prose, flows"...it sure does Eileen!
A beauty of a gem, this fine poem is full of vibrancy!
Ron
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Written by a poetess possessing a poetic muse
With the brilliance of a diamond!!
Outstanding Jeweled of a poem!
Love Peace and Joy to you always..Yolie
Richard
love & peace
William
Thanks,
Dan
What can I say bu "exquisite!" That's actually an understatment because I don't believe I've read many poems on this site that have BOTH metaphors AND similes. Excellent expressive write! WOW!!
George