It's a golden sunny day full of happiness but there's also a blue note of sadness my love and I are doing just grand though the world is hard to understand there is the mottled grey of confusion midst the purple haze of illusion there is the lapis lazuli of lovers dreams against the sable color of evil schemes soon the grim of crimson on the ground will bleed among the purest pearl souls found the orange glow of bombs away will meet the dismal darkness of the day soon the beautiful indigo of night will be hidden by smoke that blinds the sight what brings us to this granite hour that destroys the lovely green of flower pray man will put away the red of rage or is the brown of Earth in its final stage~
Oh dear,I think that very last part of the poem might be a fact (unfortunately) but I am praying that humans can stop all that 'red rage' and enjoy this beautiful world.You are part of the beauty..as always,you touch your readers with excellent poetry and wisdom.
Best wishes always to you and yours
love from
Kay
...palette of thought...given life in many colors...touched with oils of sadness...of many lands...upon one earth...one wishes.
Excellent Eileen.
with hope...
John
Bravo. January, 2009 cann't come soon enough, and I'm not sure that you may be right. All for what? The powers to be just won't leave Iran alone, no matter what. And where will that lead us. Your beautiful imagery is brilliant. Liz
the collective mood of our planet indeed seems grim and its cycle of motion is definitley self-serving yet is still more inspired and evolved that it has ever been ... hopefully earth is in a new beginning where the outcome is in the hands of the enlightened ...
pray man will put away the red of rage,
or is the brown of Earth in its final stage~
Well said ET. I think you've hit the nail smack dab on the head with this one. Sadly, I do believe earth is in its final stage. At least as we know it. God bless.
This poem elicits many colors of emotion, and ends with a note of sadness - unless we choose to change our path's direction. The picture is equally intriguing. Awesome.
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Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Ron
Be safe,
Karen
Best wishes always to you and yours
love from
Kay
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Amor
Love Tinka
Georg
Excellent Eileen.
with hope...
John
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Love,
Susan
love, Carole~
Love,
Becca~
And then how you reach your conclusion
They all flow and blend together
What a tapistry!
Doug
You present it so well and it
is a wonderful theme.
brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wish I wrote it!!!
good message
pax A
Most enjoyable and colorful to say the least
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace be with you
William
Hugs,
George
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
or is the brown of Earth in its final stage~
Well said ET. I think you've hit the nail smack dab on the head with this one. Sadly, I do believe earth is in its final stage. At least as we know it. God bless.
God bless you. Kathy
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.