Bed of Dreams (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 10, 2008

time, friend to no man -- there is enchantment and sweetness flowing throughout -- a beautiful piece of work -- Eileen -- peace and love Eileen -- JMW

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 10, 2008

Such a bittersweet poem, Tiger Lily. If only we could all stop time, at least once in awhile.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on December 10, 2008

A romantic and sensual poem ET, you write as sweet as a flower giving her nectar to a hummingbird.

Georg

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

an enchanting and beautiful poem, Eileen ...

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

...what a beautiful write...touching...and poetry that flows...with wishes...
really fine Eileen.
John

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

lovely work, Eileen.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

To have enough time to do what you want in bed, as well in our lives, that is hard to make...life is way TOO short, even if we live to be a hundred...Ed

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

ET,
Beautiful flow, rhythm and rhyme here, reminiscent for me of the finer work of Elizabeth Browning in its theme, phrasing and choice of image and vocabulary.
John

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

The cadence of this poem is exquisite as it trips and falls and winds around to the crux of the dream...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Oh how this moves and flows with every drip of the pen expressing a love you wait and yearn for...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

romantic longings tease the senses with this rhythmic measure

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Excellent. Time marches on whether we like it or not. It's a pity to waste it. Liz

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Stunning write Eileen....romantic words speaking a story!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

very well expressed romanctic verse my dear poetess, hugs

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Beautiful, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Dear Eileen,

Your words flow so exquisitely and lovingly - gorgeous write!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Enchanting love poem with a sad touch of melancholy...

Carole~

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Above all let there be love! You certainly captured the yearning for it Eileen! Love and Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Such exquisite precision of image and emotion pulls one by the heart and embraces the reader's soul in marvelous way. Tones of melancholy may drift from the shadows of these lines but the persistence of love contained in each makes even those beautiful.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

A beautiful love poem comparing lost love to the seasons. This is great. May Spring come one day.

Mary

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Great flow to this poem that carries you to the wistful ending.

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Love can create such thoughts. You captured them marvelously.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Fantastic write, always

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Fabulous write, Eileen. Absolutely spot-on rhyme and metre and the drive through the intensity of longing - impatience almost - is palpable, though the mood is tender and sensual. Reminds me of the sweet but tempestuous in the person of Shakespeare's Juliet, though the viewpoint is seemingly (by the time references) from an older woman's p.o.v. Excellent penmanship here. Kate xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Wonderfuly wrti, my friend . . . There are a couple of ways to take this poem . . . As a classic love poem to someone who is far away . . . Or it can be metaphysical in respect to the world around you and the Heavens above . . . Either way it works for me . . .

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

So beautiful a love in this fantastic yearning write. Love and hugs, Bonnie...I hope he comes soon....

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Beautifully imaged, Eileen, the yearning is palpable. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.