Hidden Domain (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Eileen, the rhyme, the verse...perfection.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

this has a unique flow reminiscent to somali style of writing poetry. Quadruplets. GBQ

Reviewed on January 8, 2009

esoteric or not, there is comprehension and great wisdom shared in your lines -- though you say they are in your domain, and will remain hidden -- Eileen your depth is amazing -- this was not the product of one who dwells in the domain of shallow thinking -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 8, 2009

great expressive veres Eileen, and we deserve to keep our hidden domain. the reason God made thoughts personal, hugs

Reviewed by Eric Glassman

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

Very nice poem indeed :-) <eric>

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

enjoyed your write Eileen
As always
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

A stunning vow and creed containing much pain and yet overflowing with soulful integrity. Thanks tremendously for the read,

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

There is a lantern
but no light burns
there is a mind
vacant and blind

Truly sounds like our modern world to me, and I hope the light returns soon.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

I agree with others reviewers, this one is different of you daily and tranquile poetry which is more of rose petals and delicate porcelaine than this one with a hint of sad bitterness, but the all, made a strange flower with its own beauty.

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

Thank you for sharing another excellent write from one of AD's finest.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 7, 2009

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! 'In deepest night of soul'------- BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

acknowledging hidden depths sheds light into their darkness, and then they are not so dark :)

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Different for you, Eileen. Unique and thought provoking:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Very interesting thoughts no one really knows whats
Behind the hidden doorway of the mind
I love the wisdom in your words
and the amazing rhyming
Eileen this one left this reader ( me )
To ponder over this brilliant piece
Peace Love and Light.....Morning Star

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

"phoney metaphors
like pseudo whores
those you can toss
with the other dross"

this strophe is the heart of this poem and it definitely beats to the change of a pace maker ...

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Dear Eileen, It has been a long time since I last visited your den. I apoligize for this. Your poem is very alarming for a friend and you know how much we care for you. Let me send you a speedy ray of light with the hope that it will brighten the hidden domain. Love Emile

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Wisdom and thoughts held close and deeply envisioned within your mind, perhaps one day they will burst into a rainbow of purity. Hope you are doing well....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Eileen, this rhyming is fantastic and the visuals are great. "No" one knows what lies in the minds of another...this causes this reader to want to dwell on the "hidden domain" and hear more. Very enjoyable.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Wonderful write and piccy, Eileen; fantastic! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Eileen, you do know the art of rhyme. an art I envy. -gene.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

Splendid writing, Eileen...you really have the touch
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on January 6, 2009

I love the smooth rhyming.