Captivating (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on June 13, 2009

Wonderful write, I enjoyed it
Have a great day
Ray { The Buzzard }

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

beautiful poetry!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

Beautiful and captivating!...M

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 11, 2009

Not quite what I expected with that photo... hee, hee...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 11, 2009

Wham-bang thanks mam! as been the complain starting from Eve under the apple tree being mad seeing the idiotic smile on Adam's face.
The word "foreplay" comes to man's mind as something you expect at the Super Bowl, long caresses, murmurs, whispers, sweet words, skin exploration is for nerds and ninnies, or so they think!
That give a few of us wolfing Casanovas, a season-ticket to the marvelous Tour de Chambres that our lovely ladies breathless expect. LOL

Georg

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Another beauty. . . .
Teaching me the art of poetry reading!
Doug

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

I'm tellin' Ma, she won't like you givin' away all her secrets...e

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Eileen,
He has learned from her and through her and moved to a higher level of awareness and of soul; I like where you take me with this fine piece and the positive response it elicits from me.
John

Reviewed by . . (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Sunset having emotions is clever.
I think not, that women are like felines masturbating.
No real man likes that.
Poetry is ok. Subject matter, rhyme and meter are not in these words as poem.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Wow!Another wonderful sensual poem.Wonderfully wrtitten Eileen. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

She taught him well. The art of seduction is one which takes time. I like Sinatra's song, "Nice and Easy Does It". If a man takes interest in a woman's depths, his own pleasure is ten-fold...I love the first stanzas that delve into a woman's mystery and her attunement with nature. The moon and the tides are so closely linked with us. Fine write, Eileen...

Lin

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Such a woman is blessed indeed to have won the affection of him who is willing to learn to bend himself towards her and to mould himself around the nature of her essence. Such emotionally in-tune sensitivity, and such a yearning, teachable spirit seems precious and rare to me. The captivation of such a couple would be mutual and complete. A heart-melting write, Eileen. Many struggling married couples might be helped and enlightened by your form of poetic education. Some husbands do not even look at their wives, let alone watch them - except in objective or negative ways, and sadly, in such instances, the words "love-making" may not even apply. Beautifully felt and rendered. Thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

A very deep and emotional write my friend with much wisdom as well. Enjoyed this much...well done.
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Ah how true it is that love making is a lost art to many aspiring lovers.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Captivating - indeed, Eileen, tender passion expressed in beautiful lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 10, 2009

Captivating poem, Eileen. Well done.