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Spring Love
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The park smelled like spring

On the bench i sat staring

down

I watched a cherry blossom

skitter in the breeze across

the ground

hearing a piano in

the distance

I felt   it 's haunting play

somewhere in my being

the hurt in me so intense

I gasped

I knew one day he would

leave

I felt a wet drop on my hand

rain

no a tear only one

there won't be

anymore

The breeze arose

picked up the blossom

it's movement fusing with

the pulse of the music and

the quivering of my heart

all coalescing

in one cluster

spinning

towards oblivion

It isn't like I didn't know

the music would end

the blossom would disappear

the tear would dry up

and all would be gone

forever gone

like all moments that don't last

hold fast

hurting heart

hold fast

etw

 
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 Reviews of "Spring Love"
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 9, 2011
This poem took me on a journey of spinning breezes and twirling pink blossoms and then through the layers of a hurting heart and yes I could feel too the heart holding fast and somehow this read left me feeling that new blossoms were going to be found just a faithful-breath away.
A magical write Eileen,thanks for sharing it.
Hugs and love
from
your aussie pal
Kay
Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
Another inspiring piece from you and what a great picture. Your descriptions almost made the picture come alive. Loved it E.T.
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
A perfect pictorial of the essence of sorrow's moment caught up in the glory of Springs expressive dance. There is great tenderness and that touch of realization that you captured in such a poignant moment Eileen. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 22, 2011
well said
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
like spring some things fade. Powerful and heartfelt. well written ~ Morgan
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
what a powerfully loving array of emotion as the heart loses its grasp ... hope's all ok, ET ,,,
Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Wow! What a beauty! Thanks.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
awww..heartfelt Gem, beautifully displayed!!!
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
A captivating flow in this passionate poem!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Like a pure cascading waterfall of emotion and steadfast insight. Lovely flow of thought super Chum. Peace and love ... richard
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
hold fast indeed! SO WELL DONE
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Expressions of a deeply-felt pain of love. GBQ
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Very beautiful sweet lady sighh....Hugsss stay safe and well....
love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxox


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
An emotional overture–one of your very best!

Ron
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Lovely recolections. Splended writing.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
So sad, Sis. I truly hope better days are ahead for you.

PS: You may regret inviting the old Ed family out there for that BBQ by the lake. That old Jersey Devil says once he gets there, he plans to stay with you, forever!
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Very beautiful capture of feelings so many of us share.
John
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
Excellent! Sad yet beautiful in its own right.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
To have tasted is the key. The music will return with fresh notes and new scents. Spring never fails. Patrick
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
Photo is breathtaking, peaceful, and beautiful as it wraps around the sounds of the day calmly moving before vanishing into a memory. Movingly beautiful...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
All things will always be, there but what the soul will see, eternal, deep felt loss and hope for renewal, for coming back, very tender, haunting, melody this poem, Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
beautiful observations
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
How to live in the moment, Eileen,
of actual experience, no virtual here
but the truth of beauty surrounding.
Yes, there will be fading and loss,
but oh the moment!

John
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
An emotional piece of poetry that comes from a true poets heart. Marvelous writing.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
You are still loved by your brothers on the east coast & in the midwest...e
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
The day the music died, Eileen, the day the music died. Perfect analogy to this haunting piece of work. Your spring love, complete with that beautiful photo, is the ache of love. The acky-breaky of love. Not trying to be funny, for this is not the kind of poem that would appreciate that sort of humor. Just trying to make the comments fit the poem.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 19, 2011
What a breathtaking poem, I love the photo and everything else about this. Yes your ending did it for me. Hold fast hurting heart, hold fast..I can relate.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber
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