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WHEN?
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- simply time to live -


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meanwhile,
the waves lick the sand,
giving generous pleasure
and wiping off traces,
prints of ponderous days.

and I lie,
wait,
contemplate.

meanwhile,
a seagull spots its prey,
as lovers kiss away their darkness,
kindly invited by the sun.

and I dream,
sit,
hesitate.

meanwhile,
there's a war
where young kids are called soldiers,
blinded by lies and dust.

and I try to gather strength;
do I reflect
or do I act?

meanwhile,
an old lady dies,
her gray hair, her ashes
are clouds in my eyes.

and I pause,
feel,
meditate.

until I finally find the words
that tell me to stop believing
that all is happening
while I'm watching,
passively dreaming,
in the meanwhile.

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 Reviews of "WHEN?"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Sometimes we passively sit while life goes on around us...we have no alternative other than to live. Very beautiful, with beautiful imagery.

Reviewed by Hira Sadhak
Reviewed on November 22, 2007
Axilea

I have enjoyed many of your poems.It seems this one is less painful. But beautifu.However, I think it is suffering which produces much more meaningful art. Thanks
Hira

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Beautiful work...there is so much to ponder in the lines that cause one to wrench in frustration with the horrors of this world.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
such imagery, as usual. I am taken by the beauty of the poem.
Well done.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Life goes on, regardless of what we do -- Dream, meditate, take action or simply ponder that "whats" of life. The nagging question is When will all this ugliness end?

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
What a great poem, Axilea. Phrases so beautiful you have to read them three times in a row: "blinded by dust and lies"; ...her gray hair, her ashes are clouds in my eyes."--all so beautiful. A passive dream that leads to positive action is always the most blessed kind of dream. Hope you find yourself dancing with the motion that's spurred by this emotion--that you bathe in the ocean of possibilities. Hope the clouds in your eyes rain down the right words, and nourish the ground you walk on, and spring up flowers with scents more exotic than you have heretofore known. --Charlie

Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Beautiful serenity in verse, to just sit back and relax. Well done, Axilea.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Sometimes as this write suggests we need to just be passive, sit back, think things throught and then act when the time is right. To rush in blindly to the fight is for fools and presidents. Lots of room in your write for readers thoughts to co mingle which is always nice. Keep up the word...

Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Axilea,

Very perplexing question if we chose to let it be. There is a time and a season for everything and yet not enough time or reason. Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed on November 20, 2007
A unique composition in imagery, contents and rhythm ~ delivering esoteric ambrosias in an exoteric tray. A profound thoughts' striking piece.

I salute You Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
Reflective thoughts of dimentional stepping stones verse of when things come together.


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