No place for revenge. (poem) by Axilea MU on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

I like it. Very good.

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Dear Axilea, So well described in a short wondereful poem. Lie is the source of madness, violence and revenge which never have any positive outcome. The truth always emerges like oil floats on water.
Thank you for sharing. Emile

Reviewed by carol weyler (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

but; still, they find a place...i know..
mysterianne'

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

Eventually revenge has a way of coming full circle for those who thrive on negativity and hurting others.
So few words, say so much...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

Wow Axilea, you got my attention!
Wonderful endearing poem!
As I believe, Negativity breeds Negativity!
Positiveness does the same!
I'll stay there, but I understand your poem!
Few words (than the style I write) but intensely written and felt!

Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
Write On!
YOur works/words are sweet shining gems!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Axilea,

Being able to walk away without looking back is a step in the right direction. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Revenge only starts the target on its on circle and leaves coldness as satisfaction. - David

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

if only the world could adhere to this principle ...

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

There is always the choice to decide how one reacts...to move forward and or let the past be the past is so much more worthy...revenge is neither healthy nor satisfying...

nice work, Axilea...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Amen! The truth without the sugar coating, and it is on target!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

You are so right, there is no room or time for revenge. Only brings about more hurt and pain, well written...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

very powerful write and well placed within the reality of the human spirit. those first few lines are so very true.

always.
randy

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Words of wisdom in minimal word usage that creates a dramatic affect in this one of your best works.

fee

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Revenge hurts two people.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Excellent crafting of these lines, Axilea. You are indeed are true wordsmith weaving gems.
Amor

Reviewed by Matthew Wright (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

I love the simplicity, almost like haiku, each line of few and carefully considered words.

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Standing-room only inside the love-room...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Oh the lies they tell, no room for such behavior...Karma is a turnabout..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Axilea,

Thought provoking excellence--well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by stan nassano

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

yes it's self poison as are lies,
something to think about here,
take care,
stan