We Became (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 11, 2007

Would that it be so... ...the way your words express it, Belle. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on March 11, 2007

As if two lovers immortalized in time who meet over and over again in sucessive centuries...
Wonderful work as always, belle.
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 11, 2007

Like a secret burning thread, this fuse endures through every landscape and era. Such a hallowed and reverential tone to this, Belle. Like their union marked the bliss of sacred ground. Reminds me of what Dylan Thomas says in his lines: (I write) but for the lovers, their arms round the griefs of the ages and who pay no heed or wages to my craft or sullen art". Symbolic life and love which sustains purpose and continuity. Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 10, 2007

an enchanting and beautiful poem, La Belle ... such passion can never be quenched, it's fire is much too strong ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 10, 2007

Absolutely beautiful, LaBelle.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 10, 2007

As always a pen full of grace and charm, dashed with a touch of spice.

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

"We Became"

Just my style~
Ah, LaBelle I could read on, and on with this poem.
Adored it...songs of the soul...love it, loved it!

Continued blessings and enlightenment to you,
From the Heart of an Artist...

Reviewed by Erin Woods

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

Absolutely a fantastic write ! ....much enjoyed...erin

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

Oh Beautiful love poetry!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

I love, love, LOVE the imagery you use in this beautiful write, La Belle, simply gorgeous!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

simply grand, labelle, simply grand! brava, dear lady!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

i like how the first line repeats throughout, bringing us back into its epic journey

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

Passionately Good, especially loved your last stanza, La Belle.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

Oh yes..the becoming of that whiche we are..lovers enternal in every dimension on all planes in every memory of lives past and times ageless..

Love this..am saving it..thankyou Belle!

vesna:)

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

Your poetry always has a musical quality. No exception here.
Rusty

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

Outstanding write of true love together forever in time,
Loved it,Well said,

Michael

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

very lovely work. effective use of similar first lines in each segment. luck with this one.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 9, 2007

La Belle:

It's wonderful to read your beautiful poems again. Lovely work!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)