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Hot Caramel
By La Belle Rouge


she was uninspiring, pallid and bland
ivory insipidness owned her senses
she had never tasted the sweetness
of rich caramel on her sharp tongue
nor danced to a sensual latin beat
her cold feet restricted to two steps
her hips bound up in tight ribbons
of staid similitude, vanilla boredom

he was bronze with black diamond eyes
that ambiguously undressed her soul
without wasting time to look at her
for she was too lily white to appreciate
the intrepid flavor of his caramel kisses
too self absorbed with hues and shades
to traverse the broad primordial galaxy
of a midnight universe in his ebony eyes

so she never watched the stars rumba
under the canopy of an endless ballroom
nor felt the earth moving beneath her
to a steady beat of ancient native drums
for she was too uninspiring, pallid, bland
there would be no bronze upon her ivory
she’d not allow her frozen vanilla cream
to melt beneath his sweet hot caramel




1/28/2011 La Belle Rouge

Music "Knights In White Satin"





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 Reviews of "Hot Caramel"
Reviewed by Mindy May
Reviewed on January 31, 2011
Woa . . . This is HOT! Ice cream no more, touch or not touched. This is one of the best poems I have read on Authorsden. Bravo and thank you! Sexaaaaa hugs~

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 30, 2011
Toooo baaad! The allegorical juxtaposition of opposites is sublime. I sense a bit of truth in this insightful tome. You are the poetess pristine.

Rion

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 29, 2011
a profound write in many ways, i love it--sometimes, we are so unaway of what we miss as we piously live our lives!

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on January 29, 2011
I wonder what sadness led her to reside within this icy domain...
Perhaps one day she will have an unforgettable experience that allows her to throw caution to the wind!...and his sweet hot caramel will melt her fozen vanilla cream for ever...
So skilfully written...Admiration...
Hugs, Diana...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
Sexy, kinda makes me want to experiment with some warm caramel, though I really like hot chocolate on my vanilla ice cream...e

Reviewed on January 28, 2011
sticky sweet write. Poor caramel, or pour more caramel. Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
This, Belle, is a well crafted call
to the staid to break free, cut loose,
embrace Eros and Aprodite
discard all..
and speaking of desserts and desserts only
hot caramel topping is right up there.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
Stunning, Belle you bring the imagery of the heart to life with such stunning descriptives and soft sensual desires...can so see this couple on the dance floor under the stars...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
This is striking in imagery and tone...
Man, I'd like to melt beneath sweet hot caramel, never mind the two step!
Be well,
Christine

Reviewed on January 28, 2011
Sometimes opposite just don't attract. Well written. Enjoyed.

Mary

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
That would have been melted caramel I might add to go along with those knights of white satin. Beautiful crafting of which there is no equal.
Amor

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
What we are seeing here is the development and steady growth of an artist taking her art to higher and higher levels. No false flattery here.
Here we have the metaphor of caramel-vanilla move beyond color issues to celebrate joy itself, joy in its various incarnations--ultimately hinting at, stating and exploring the question what does it mean to be alive.
Well done.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
Very nicely done.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
I love the sexual and passion involved in this supreme writing. As always my Dear Lady Friend this poem was a number One!


Love You
Tony

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
Belle, not the ending I expected, too bad it is her loss, I will take Hot Caramel anytime...lol

Peace, love and light,
Amber


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