Such delicate poise and balance to this divine write, Belle, and it plays upon the heart and mind as the dappled light upon the pale moss and bark of those dazzling birches. Very much like the contrast of the earthy, full-blooded raven-black hair and bronze skin as a complement. It leaves a satisfying and enduring sentiment and image. xx
You tell such a beautiful story La Belle Rouge... a beautiful vision and felt and experienced in your writing! When it involves nature you have my complete attention through those you envision in this poem.
Your story telling skills in romantic verses are beyond compare and this one is no exception...
fee
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2012
...puts one in the native element... a vestigial vision, rare and radiant... love the music and the imagery... oh for those warm summer nights beneath the birches by the river, with the fire crackling and the lap of the current over the pebbles by the shore... this poem takes us there! Wonderful!
Simply enchanting. That scene must've played out millions of times before a single European step foot on the continent and ruined an idyllic lifestyle forever. I'm reminded of Man in the Wilderness, where Richard Harris is abandoned for dead and survives. Anyway, he is in the deep forest when a warrior brings his a woman who has childbirth in front of Richard Harris's eyes while spring snow still lies on the forest floor. Nine months after that summertime tryst, a child is born in March or April. It was one of the most moving movie scenes I've ever experienced.
Flowing of the river and beneath river birches
you have entailed a romance over which the
Sister Eagle Glides. Marveling in the music and
your word brush of rejoicing.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
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Vickie
your Native American poetry
*La Belle* so full of spirit,
as well the artist and music
Lady Vivian
Wonderful, thank you for this wonderful share
Love and Light
Lily
fee
a pretty piece indeed, Poetess...
Roger
Ron
Very NICE on all counts. Dick
you have entailed a romance over which the
Sister Eagle Glides. Marveling in the music and
your word brush of rejoicing.
Lady Mary Ann
Always,
Deborah