How can you mend a broken heart, the Bee Gees come to mind with this line.....
Mending
by Amber "V" Moonstone 9/28/07
When you really love someone,
Your heart aches for their touch,
Your heart speaks to their heart.
Your heart feels their pain.
Your heart melts at the sight of them.
Your heart beats to the rhythm of theirs.
Your heart trembles during lovemaking.
Your heart reverberates while they walk away.
Your heart jumps with the scent of them.
Your heart breaks when they leave you.
Your heart remembers over and over and over again, and again and again,
till your heart mends......
author's notes: dedicated to those who are mending a broken heart..
Much Peace, Love, and Light to you,
Amber "V" Moonstone
Mending a broken heart. Time is all that can and then you are skittish when next someone says I love you. You want to run away, not feel that pain again.
Amber, you have caught the feelings wonderfully as you always do. Beautifully penned!
Love,
Annie
You capped a wonderful feeling of love with the pain of loss. I loved the poetic style and thoughts that likely depict many people who are on the mend.
Poignant yet sweet and tender look at the pain and ache of breakups.
Fee
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Wonderfully done Amber.
We are blessed when we have experienced all of these feelings and emotions by being in love and loving. I loved reading this piece over and over.
My very best to you
Chris
Words of wisdom, gently spoken from a gentle soul. Your creativity is endless with your love of life clearly penetrating through time and space. Great write...
While mending we must go through the minds albums of reflection and the pain turns to happiness for the positives are stil remaining. It's good for the soul to reflect.
Love your words.
Susan
I love that song; How can you mend... a broken heart... how can a loser ever win... how can you stop the sun from shinning; what makes the world go round. Chorus/ la-la-la ;)
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
Pain and disillusion go hand in hand.
Georg
I love this loving and passionate side to you!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Let your heart mend and the healing begin!
With sad twangs, their is magic love waiting!
STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
Amber, you have caught the feelings wonderfully as you always do. Beautifully penned!
Love,
Annie
Fee
We are blessed when we have experienced all of these feelings and emotions by being in love and loving. I loved reading this piece over and over.
My very best to you
Chris
Be safe,
Karen
LOVE the cloud pic (being a Skywatcher, I'd say that).
And the poem is deeply moving, thought provoking excellence. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love your words.
Susan
Kathy
well done...
John