Very passionate indeed Amber, warm and sexy all the way.
Fee
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
My my my very Passionate poetry-lovely images my great friend-Hope the universe(God) gives you what you want and soon
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2007
Amber,
Just happened to stop by AD today and was pleased to run into one of your poems. I would like to say to Dr. Amundsen, that although everyone is entitled to critique the works on this site, the manner in which it is done is vitaly important. None of us likes every piece ot literiture we read, but, we certainly do not have the right to personally attack an author like Dr. Amundsen has done here. It is obvious that Dr. Amundsen does not have the personal tools to properly critique any work that she has read. Perhaps she should read technical manuals instead, as, these do not require the "personal" envolvement of other literature types. Your works have always been inspiring and thought provoking. They have been real and about the IMPORTANT ideas and ideals in this life.It is through works like yours that others come to understand the earth, environment and humanity. Do not let the bumbling words of an obviously "fractured" reader stay on your doorstep. Get the brrom, sweep it up and put it in the trash where it belongs!
With my very best as always
Chris
I feel a DEEP LONGING here, in your heart crying out in pain for the ONCE TRUE love you ONCE felt and want to feel again!
Beautiful representation of a lonely wanting BACK kind of lovers passion Viv! I love it!
For the ones who don't understand your heart, and share nothing of their OWN heart, leaves me with not much to say! To read someone often and knowing their real passions, helps anyone to know their real heart lessons! and testements to their own faith!
Some people have issues and try to put it on others, for the lack of feeling something they want desperately in their own hearts!
Let it rideeeeeeeeee! my dear, your passion is felt in your heart and through your words!
I feel a craving need to be filled~! :)
Warm love, Warmer hugs and Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady SWEET Sheoxoxoxooo STay Positive!
Without a doubt! :)
- If she was to read mine, I would still let it fly- WHY, because I know my heart and my Lord knows my heart and I know why I write and what I write is to touch the ones it should! and it will in it's time! Just as yours will my Spiritual GREAT loving kind friend!
Faith+Hope= Love
P.s. Yea, P.S. lol - Viv, must be action taken, and a Brand New Year, for newer OpEN growth lessons! - New Year! New Beginnings - Take the urge and splurge! BE YOU and feel yourself come alive, with the passions inside waiting to be shared at the right time.
The raw need of passions is so near to the raw and impulsive needs of lust. Urgency in the one goes too fast to be absorbed in the other. It all boils down to lust vs. passion for me.
Love,
Susan
Interesting write here my friend...first the passion is very evident in both the words and your writing. The structure does indeed remind me of Beat poetry...while you do have rhythm in this piece, it is composed as if from individual bits of thought, yet the story within the lines in precise. The passion and yearning in this piece is very evident and there is a poignant sense here as well...as if something or someone has been lost. It is an interesing and wll written piece of free verse.
Stunning write!
Beautifully expressed desire and passion
yes correct...One cannot live on thoughts alone
Brilliant written beautifully expressed view
Of sensuality!
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....Merry Christmas....Morning Star
An honest and beautifully described passionate poem! Very deep feelings that need fulfillment!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
One can't live on thoughts alone!
I wake up missing my next future ex.
Long distance relationships only work for passionless people.
Otherwise it blows the mind, and indeed the relationship loses direction, meaning, and keeps ones heart caged....
I concur 110%! This poem stated words on my mind when I awakened this morning, missing my paramour. Thanks, Amber, for capturing the essence of my thoughts.
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"Here, Kitty, Kitty."
Forgive me. Your firey words have flushed out my true nature!
Richard
Fee
Just happened to stop by AD today and was pleased to run into one of your poems. I would like to say to Dr. Amundsen, that although everyone is entitled to critique the works on this site, the manner in which it is done is vitaly important. None of us likes every piece ot literiture we read, but, we certainly do not have the right to personally attack an author like Dr. Amundsen has done here. It is obvious that Dr. Amundsen does not have the personal tools to properly critique any work that she has read. Perhaps she should read technical manuals instead, as, these do not require the "personal" envolvement of other literature types. Your works have always been inspiring and thought provoking. They have been real and about the IMPORTANT ideas and ideals in this life.It is through works like yours that others come to understand the earth, environment and humanity. Do not let the bumbling words of an obviously "fractured" reader stay on your doorstep. Get the brrom, sweep it up and put it in the trash where it belongs!
With my very best as always
Chris
Beautiful representation of a lonely wanting BACK kind of lovers passion Viv! I love it!
For the ones who don't understand your heart, and share nothing of their OWN heart, leaves me with not much to say! To read someone often and knowing their real passions, helps anyone to know their real heart lessons! and testements to their own faith!
Some people have issues and try to put it on others, for the lack of feeling something they want desperately in their own hearts!
Let it rideeeeeeeeee! my dear, your passion is felt in your heart and through your words!
I feel a craving need to be filled~! :)
Warm love, Warmer hugs and Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady SWEET Sheoxoxoxooo STay Positive!
Without a doubt! :)
- If she was to read mine, I would still let it fly- WHY, because I know my heart and my Lord knows my heart and I know why I write and what I write is to touch the ones it should! and it will in it's time! Just as yours will my Spiritual GREAT loving kind friend!
Faith+Hope= Love
P.s. Yea, P.S. lol - Viv, must be action taken, and a Brand New Year, for newer OpEN growth lessons! - New Year! New Beginnings - Take the urge and splurge! BE YOU and feel yourself come alive, with the passions inside waiting to be shared at the right time.
W~
Love,
Susan
Flesh and blood required
In order to feel desired.
Pretty straight in my book. A very honest, bare look at emotions vs. hormones. Liked it a lot.
--RaeLynn
Be safe,
Karen
Beautifully expressed desire and passion
yes correct...One cannot live on thoughts alone
Brilliant written beautifully expressed view
Of sensuality!
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....Merry Christmas....Morning Star
Stunning write of passion, unquenched...excellently penned wonderment!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Love,
Eileen
I wake up missing my next future ex.
Long distance relationships only work for passionless people.
Otherwise it blows the mind, and indeed the relationship loses direction, meaning, and keeps ones heart caged....
Christine
Regis