you alone have wounded my soul
with your suggestions of absence
and taken all my senses captive
with just a glance from your eyes
you are temptation wrapped in flesh
wild seduction’s wayward daughter
who rides the back of sea winds
like black horses with no bridles
thoughts of you burn out of control
for me there is no plausible escape
from deep cravings to taste your lips
and feel your soft warmth imprinted
against the hard sinews of my thighs
there is no diversion from my thoughts
of your intimate flavor implanted on
the tongue of my unruly imagination
DJA 10/13/2010
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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2010
You have set me on fire sweet DJ...have a wonderful day and be safe..Hugsss
DJ, This poem leaves me with the "burning" desire to hop on the next plane and kiss your lips and touch the hard sinews of your thighs..woah, bring on the ice shower. This song you chose is dark but so sensual. I think it is on the sound tract to City of Angels but sung by Allanis Morrisette..Love everything about this poem and all that it implies.
You are definitely heating up the den today, thank goodness, it's 37 degrees this morning in Connecticut.
You have captivated me with this poem. I want that tongue of your unruly imagination right where it would be hot to the touch and warmly welcomed. Like the coffee ad says, good to the last drop.
You are one hell of a romantic man. I can bearly catch my breath.
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hot bold passion
I love it!
and the closing line brings forth
and even more tempting visual
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V
You are definitely heating up the den today, thank goodness, it's 37 degrees this morning in Connecticut.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
another beauty from your pen.
John
You are one hell of a romantic man. I can bearly catch my breath.
Ragno Donna
Blessings,
Christine