she dances through my dreams
in time to an exotic rumba beat
her firm hips swaying side to side
like a fertile palm tree by the sea
where gulls frolic in rhythmic waves
and lovers lie together on white sand
welcoming the ebony cover of night
she reaches her hands out to me
and whispers in my ear, temptations
that rival the brilliance of starlight
her breasts are twin hills of delight
uncovered and firm with hot desire
she bids me touch and taste their tips
on my tongue’s journey southward
her laughter baptizes the night with fire
captures and holds my soul in her palm
in the night, in the moonlight, we dance
flesh to flesh we commune soul to soul
drink our fill of the strong liquor of love
we revel, besotted on passion’s pleasures
until unwelcome dawn dances her away
DJA 12/2/2010
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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2011
Oh my ....pure delight sweet DJ as always...sighhh...stay safe and keep your heart warm...Hugsss
You chose the song by Santana that sets the mood for this sensual poem. I loved the ride that you brought me on as I read your words, being held captive by the sensuality that filled my mind and body. You know how to make a woman swoon...Nicely erotic and lovely to read.
Delicious...
Ah, that cursed dawn, DJ, that has the bad habit of dissolving love's beauty in its grey cold light!
Once again, you give love and romance the credit they're due..and how you do it with nature-rich and flesh-delight imagery.
Yes!
Okay, this is perfection. I believe you have just outdone yourself, I really do. I need to go find one of those little lunchbags, one of those paper bags used for hyper-ventilating. I have to go. It was nice, but I have to go...
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Delicious...
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Once again, you give love and romance the credit they're due..and how you do it with nature-rich and flesh-delight imagery.
Yes!
John
Love,
Sage