when she moves me it is not with mere passion
though feminine seduction is the cloak she wears
it goes so far beyond sensual words and images
it surpasses sexual dreams and desires of the flesh
her heart envelopes mine in a cocoon of acceptance
in the warm embrace of her soul mine is rejuvenated
i whisper to her my pain and she heals my wounds
with simple words of shameless longing adoration
until i feel as if i must be the only man in her world
a world we share, a fragrant garden of sensuality
where she is a flawless rose and i am her gardener
who lives only to water her beauty with words of love
watch her petals open and inhale her sweet scent
when she moves me i am moved far beyond words
into another dimension only the two of us can share
DJA 3/20/2011
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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2011
Perfect poem re the love of Twin Flames..
absolutely divine poetry..ah, I am overwhelmed..am saving this one..thank you DJ...
So sweet and romantic, and I love the flow. Lately, I have
noticed that a lot of prose poems are j u s t prose. Nothing
poetic that I can see. Hear and feel! "She Moves Me" is rich with imagery, rhythm, and soft, sensual, sounds. Almost say onomatapoeia
[sp?].
You engage our senses instead of merely tossing words and
phrases in our direction:
"her heart envelopes mine in a cocoon of acceptance" :)
"fragrant garden of sensuality where she is a flawless rose..." :)
Methinks that there is another dimension you have shared!
DJ, You can water my garden anytime of the day or night. My petals await. You have penned another finely seductive poem, drawing in the most tender thoughts from panting women...
Keep them coming, you sexy gardner you...
"...in the warm embrace of her soul
mine is rejuvenated"
is the ideal and longed for
union of spirits, the moment of true sharing,
acceptance and surrender.
This work shines, DJ, it shines.
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absolutely divine poetry..ah, I am overwhelmed..am saving this one..thank you DJ...
blessings,
Vesna :)
passion is embraced in the poetic way you play the words.
-gene.
noticed that a lot of prose poems are j u s t prose. Nothing
poetic that I can see. Hear and feel! "She Moves Me" is rich with imagery, rhythm, and soft, sensual, sounds. Almost say onomatapoeia
[sp?].
You engage our senses instead of merely tossing words and
phrases in our direction:
"her heart envelopes mine in a cocoon of acceptance" :)
"fragrant garden of sensuality where she is a flawless rose..." :)
Methinks that there is another dimension you have shared!
T h a n k . y o u, Don Juan Amante!
xOx Phyllis xOx
Keep them coming, you sexy gardner you...
Yours, Lady Chatterly aka Amber "V"
mine is rejuvenated"
is the ideal and longed for
union of spirits, the moment of true sharing,
acceptance and surrender.
This work shines, DJ, it shines.
John
Regis
Blessings,
Christine