I know what haiku is, wish I knew what senryu was, as this poem is still a 5, 7, 5 combination so whats the dif...? beyond that it seems we all are addicted to life, & eventually must kick another habit too...Ed & Rufuz
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Love it!
Elizabeth
and walk as zombies
blunt force poetry!!!
love it
Short Sweet Blunt Truthful and right to the Very point of life.
Superb!!!!!
Thanks (c:)
Tracey
No one can accuse you of being long winded: this hits home like a bullet! Excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Paul;-]