There’s more ocean in fish than fish in the ocean…
Nature is wise, but Mankind… just bumbling fools.
Learn from the living, watch water in motion,
Don’t waste your time staring at small stagnant pools.
Fish are content to live their life in water,
Water is after all their life’s element.
There’s no need for them to be an “achiever,”
Living, staying alive… that’s accomplishment.
But there was one fish wanting something “better”,
He wanted “achievement,” he wanted a “first.”
He leapt out of water, fins in quick flutter,
Taking fast to the sky… but soon died of thirst…
© P. J. Oszmann (2003 inspired by a Sufi teaching tale.)
Illustration by Carrie Glenn ©
By the kind permission of the artist
www.carrieglennstudios.com
Footnote:
I recently discovered this very talented and accomplished young artist through a fortuitous “misunderstanding.”
Having clarified the misapprehension through email correspondence, she gave me her permission to use her illustration for my poem.
I am truly grateful for her kind consent.
I am updating this poem for the sole purpose of bringing her illustrative and artistic talentl to the attention of fellow authors and readers.
Please visit her website at the above address and also at www.lulu.com (Search Carrie Glenn under Artwork)
This is the most wisest poem and the way you have written this is absolutely uniquely Superb!
You are magnificent! I am in Awe. this one should be on my and everyone's refrigerator, workplaces and schools to remember forever. Thanks so Much (c :)
All my love for you and your family.
Remember your promise. (c ;) wish I was there.
Tracey xooxoxxooxxooxxo42
An excellent story...but what courage that one fish had! To die in the pursuit of discovery...a bold adventurer, he...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
Wise mirror showing how to correct face's distortion.
"A Fish Out of Water" depicts the mistakes and leaves
the option for the taker.
Keep Your quills dancing, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(