I've seen Him walk in, in black hood and cape,
Looked at you and said: "Come, I'll ease your pain."
You nodded, knowing there was no escape
And there would be no suffering again.
.
You didn't look back, you never said goodbye,
Through dark mist He carried you far away,
Left me standing there, hopelessly to cry,
Like an abandoned, lonely castaway.
But He returned, looking me up and down,
Like measuring me for his next prey.
"Did you bring me a nice funeral gown?" -
I asked. Looking scornful He said: "Just pray."
Then smiling He announced: "You're next my son."
…and dark veil covered the face of the sun…
© P. J. Oszmann (September 2007)
© Illustration created in Photoshop (2007)
Be safe,
Karen
Great work in major poetic art.
I think that if You close it with the "…and dark veil covered the face of the sun…" "the + added line" ~ leaving the closing >> "Thanks" - I said politely - "that will be fun." < < out it would reach its glorious point.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Regis
Deep pain in these lines...I'm sorry for your loss. God be with you, now and always.
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.