Sorry!!! I had to remove the first posting. It was not intended to go in for the competition.
Apologies for the inconvenience.
I am reposting here two comments received.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar 2/10/2004
excellent!
Reviewed by karla dorman 2/10/2004
(((peter))) i love it when you write haiku with elements of sparkling humor! great job--love them all, but the second one really made me LOL *ouch!* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Shakespeare’s tragic love story ‘Antony and Cleopatra’ is putt on a fair way as two lovers go for the green together only to be frustrated by the sands of time.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
Apologies for the inconvenience.
I am reposting here two comments received.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar 2/10/2004
excellent!
Reviewed by karla dorman 2/10/2004
(((peter))) i love it when you write haiku with elements of sparkling humor! great job--love them all, but the second one really made me LOL *ouch!* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)