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Afternoon Tea Time
by Michelle M Mead → (All Poetry by Michelle M Mead)
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This is a first for me, as this poem was based on two very similiar paintings. The first is called "Tea Time" by Colin Campbell Cooper, circa 1916, showing an Asian woman serving what looks like two British/European/American women. The second painting, "Afternoon Tea" by John Powell, is an empty garden where it seems tea has been finished. I had one following the other in my notebook, and only realized I was writing about both paintings after I finished. I will add the link for "Afternoon Tea," but post "Tea Time."


http://www.johnpowellfineart.com/dataviewer.asp?keyvalue=3561&subkeyvalue=55052&page=WorksDetail






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scones still nestled like babies in baskets

empty teacups but pots full-- such waste

removing the butter she held onto the lid

crystal and apt to slip like secretive thoughts

 

no, he was never hers and how could he be?

the rose embroidered tablecoth she stitched

with those same hands that served his wife

full of crumbs and left all over like her tears

 

he shared with wife both lilacs and daisies

the petals she'd catch in her hands when they left

scattering them in the lining of her pockets

to inhale at night between the silk of her sheets

 

she would kiss his lips through the thin fabric

once he left the bed that he shared with another

his body lying heavy atop her wildest of dreams

pink petals fall beneath his departing bare feet

 

other such afternoon teas would come too soon

serving them underneath the cherry blossom tree

much yet to be done in this waiting and waiting

invisible in the rain and the scent of honeysuckle

 

 

 


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Reviewed by . . (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2009
The scones would have jam and cream.

Have you ever seen, ladies in lylac?
Yes, brecky dinner and tea... not brunch, lunch and dinner. Top hoe.
You are well educated...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
Ah, the honeysuckle rain, my favorite poem. Tea time reminds of great aunts past, married of some station, able to receive close friends in warm afternoons.

Ron

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 29, 2009
You do the paintings justice.

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on June 29, 2009
The power of this poem is in its characteriztion, which is deep and convincing in so few words despite such compleity. You brought this woman to life, indeed.

Reviewed on June 29, 2009
Beautifully imaged once again, you bring the paintings to vivid life! Well done, Michelle.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on June 29, 2009
Imagine...imagine if...and how and why, you are a wonderful story teller Michelle. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 29, 2009
I agree with Linda on this Michelle, there is definately at the least a short story here that should be told. those were fazcinating times in a colony that was dominatted like the lover/servant by Victorian rule. You captured not only the times and the beauty of the paintings but also brought the characters to life with feelings and emotions.

hugs
Fee



Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
I want this to continue, Michelle. Tea Time, Chapter Two? Short story? Love the poetry you weave from visual cues. A meditation of sorts or a channeling which takes us into the painting and makes it three-dimensional...Note how the women are sitting. Straight backs and strained necks. It looks like a snapshot, the woman in the foreground decidedly tired--of what? Life? The social constrictions of her time? The servant woman looks more alive to me, her colors and outline painted more brilliantly, even though she is in the background...Beautifully written. You've captured the aura of that time...

Lin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
It is wonderful the way that you are inspired with paintings and then are able to share this inspiration, Michelle. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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