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Awakening
by Michelle M Mead → (All Poetry by Michelle M Mead)
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Inspired by a painting of the same name by Simon Bull (see link below to buy his work)

But also, as always, it's inspired by my favorite poet as well, Wilfred Owen.


http://www.simonbullgallery.com/p-94-bawakeningb.aspx


Poem Artwork

 

 

He had to be gone--

Silence, too much for anything else,

Anything golden or hope-filled or light.

 

 

Here, where dead leaves yet gathered on stone,

Under the splitting soles of war-worn shoes,

Only now would she awaken to the gutted facts,

Buried in rubble ruins all around her

 

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In battle cries, a solider dies, another left all alone--

Be it mother, father, brother, wife, the rain falls all the same,

From this density of grey covering the length of the sky.

 

 

A stem’s stability, much like a false friend, so easily bends,

To the shifting scores of brotherhood’s newly chosen wars,

Where eyelids open as softest petals from blood-soaked poppies,

Too scared to wave in the wind or hide their dotted tears of black

 

 

Bombed again and again until it’s neither night nor day--

She awakens to the murmurs of what has finally given way,

Upon the spoken notice of his untimely death on some foreign field.


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 Reviews of "Awakening"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 3, 2011
"Where have all the soldiers gone? Long time passing. Where have all the soldiers gone? Long time ago. Where have all the soldiers gone? Gone to graveyards everyone. When will they ever learn?", emerges slowly from my memory of the song of that long ago era Michelle. A poignant reminder of wars futility and the horrible waste, of young men. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
Very poignant and vivid. In war, soldiers become bloodstained poppies in the field.

Ron

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 1, 2011
The sense of loss is strong from the very first line of this poem and slowly (but deeply) penetrates the soul. The whole fourth stanza is very expressive in depicting the tragedy.

Axilea

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on April 1, 2011
This is a gloriously written masterpiece Michelle! Wow!!!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 1, 2011
beautifully written piece of work!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 1, 2011
Nicely written, Michelle.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 31, 2011
"A stem’s stability, much like a false friend, so easily bends,
To the shifting scores of brotherhood’s newly chosen wars"...Awakening indeed, Michelle. Blessed Be.

Sage


Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on March 31, 2011
Long time coming
Some things are worth waiting on
Your unique style and grandeur
Superb poetry

Reviewed on March 31, 2011
This reminded me of 'In Flander's Field' ... effectively moving, heartbreaking poetry that is coming too true for many families and warriors. Well done, Michelle. SOOOO glad to be reading you again.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 31, 2011
I was easily drawn into the mood created by your expressive verses, Michelle. Very effective. I think there is a typo in the first verse of the third stanza (solider). Thank you for sharing. Love, hugs, and best wishes,

Regis


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