Soft echoes of his voice rang out,
within a cloud they seemed to sail,
desperately she ran along river's bank,
exhausted, in field of wheat she fell
She asked of the winds to parade,
and lead her to the song of her love,
ear of an eagle heard her plea,
as it soar at dusk up above
The pine's whispering awoke her smile,
from a dream of dance these mates did share,
silence stood, as she picked a four leaf clover,
then in her ear they breathed, that he really was there
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Reviews of "Clover of Love"
Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2009
So romantic and endearing Christine
This touches the soul and heart with its beautiful tenderness.
Chrisine, I so enjoy romantic poems, though I am a lousy creator of them -- this is beautiful and so well written -- I'm jealous -- thanks for sharing -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
I like that nature conspires to bring love to our door, Christine! Like all the best Disney storylines (and animations!) I believe that awareness of love around us DOES indeed bring the world into that sphere of surreality, where everything between heaven and earth is moving in order to bring such love to bear. Love the lightness in this and the skipping-heart, sing-song movement of your lines. xx
The magic around us / I am not a guy with my head in the clouds / Maybe I should be, but . . . / Still, I understand the magic around us / Every day of life brings that magic closer to me / This poem is clever in so many ways / And yes, I believe the pine tree can actually awaken us with a soft whisper . . .
Chrissie you do not post very often so when you do it is always something that is going to be truly special. This work of art is no exception. I could feel the soft breezes, the wheat upon bare legs, the wings of the eagle and...the beating of your heart with love and longing. Very nicely done...
hugs
Fee
Oh Sweetness all over this poem. I love it!!! Yes he was there..believe in it and it will be true.
Most blessed evening to you dear spirit sister,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Great imagery, Christine. Your words brought me into the realism of the meaning of this write and I think it comes straigth from your heart and soul. Absolutely loved this. God bless.
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This touches the soul and heart with its beautiful tenderness.
Jerry
Very nice description and a beautifull mixture of nature and love.
Love Emile
Regis
the hope of passion caressing
Love & Blessings
Vickie
This has warmth and romance written all over it, and you express it beautifully.
John
Anna
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
for sharing.
Newfie Hugs Rose
Georg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
hugs
Fee
Most blessed evening to you dear spirit sister,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Be always safe,
Karen
With Love,
Cindy