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Autumn Waltz
by Christine Alwin → (All Poetry by Christine Alwin)
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Autumn Waltz

He crept up behind her,

carried her away,

her beauty blew him into full swing,

a dance of waltz was underway

 

They whirled above towns,

and were the envy of eyes.

her dress of scarlet, fancied in awe,

display of elegance, graced the skies

 

Night fell, beneath harvest moon,
he became winded to an abrupt halt,

dropping her off in river's bed,

guess this dance is over...all his fault

 

 

 

 

 
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 Reviews of "Autumn Waltz"
Reviewed by Shay White
Reviewed on December 28, 2009
I love the metaphor, nicely done. Thanks for sharing!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
Beautiful. Liz
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
absolutely a beautiful write
Great imagery
Love & Peace

William
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 27, 2009
Great imagery in this delightful colorful poem...M
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Christine, the beauty of your waltz caresses the imagination -- a beautiful leaf riding upon the currents of Fall breezes and swirls --a charming piece, a creative work that flows like the Fall breeze --peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
Christine, I loved this unique waltz,it stirs the imagination!
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
I think is my new favorite of yours, Christine. Excellent descriptive writing that doesn't miss a beat.
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
nice dance of image and emotion ...
Reviewed by Stacy Savage
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
This poem is amazing and really unique. I truly enjoyed this! Very creative!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
I love this fabulous poem, gives me an idea for a haiku...this is a keeper!
Carole~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
What a gorgeous metaphor. A joy to read
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Superb imagery here, Christine.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Oh my...this is so very beautiful sweet lady...well done indeed...have a wonderful and safe day..Hugss
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
WHO WOULD HAVE BELIEVED THAT THE WIND AND A LEAF WOULD HAVE INSPIRED SUCH A WONDERFUL DISPLAY OF YOUR GIFT...THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS.

JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Christine,
You take romance and give it a natural poignancy in this beautifully conceived and expressed poem.

John
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Christine, I think that this is one of the most beautiful and original poems I've read so far about autumn. This goes into my library.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Autumn was never a good dancer, it didn't like to face the music and dance, Jack Frost otherwise....haven't you see people doing the little tap dance waiting for the morning bus?

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Oh Christine, this is gorgeous...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Dear Christine I like the way you write, it reminds me of a French song, which says: Please keep the last dance for me. Brava, Love emile
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
And a beautiful dance it is! Wonderful Chrsitine!

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Wonderful write, Christine; well penned! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Better late than never, Christine, it has been a tough day for me. Yep. blame it on the "him's" of this world. You can never go wrong there, at least if you believe the daytime talk shows, and I do. don't you? Doesn't everyone? Just kidding, but I do blame that Cantankerous Old Wind for dropping pretty Miss Leaf into the river bed. That's worse than "put out or get out." I think.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Beautiful Visions Christine!
and I love your picture too...
and how sweet to be "dropping off in river's bed"
sorry it was over though...
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
nicely written I like the metaphoric qualities!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Christine,

The beauty of the season captured in beautifully imaged verse: who needs a picture when this will do just fine? Plays with ALL the senses. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Ahhh Chrissie, you cature the heart and the imagination with such wonderful images of leafs dancing on the wind. this grips the heart and soul and invites the spirit in all of us to go out looking for that perfect leaf on a perfectly stunning fall day. I loved and enjoyed this one a lot.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Shawn Ness
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Amazing... I did nothing and it is still my fault!

I lovde the poem.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Oh, I was just getting started with your wonderful fantasy ride, and then it was over, boy those men, they need to get with the program!
Wonderful poem, Christine, I really loved it.
Peace,
Love,
&
Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Lovely. Great imagery!

I can only guess how Walt Disney would have projected this romantic scene on the big screen.

"...all his fault." Remember, fellas, there's no substitute for a great finish!

Richard
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Beautifully written, Christine.
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Beautiful tale of Autumn!! I love how the breeze picked up the vibrant red leaf and carried her away in a waltz. Lovely imagery with your cleverly crafted words. Really enjoyed it.


Anna
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