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Burning Desire
by Christine Alwin → (All Poetry by Christine Alwin)
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Burning Desire

Her black lashes singed,
as her eyes burned with desire,
watching him across the floor,
dancing real slow with another,
she  swept him away from her,
to the lapping waves a ’shore,
bare foot and free, they did jive,
bodies singing in harmony,
moving to the beat of maracas,
his fingers sketched upon her back,

the moon shown her deep dimple,
his smile, stole her breath away,
they were a match, lit ‘neath the heavens,
till abruptly, the music silenced,
and again, her eyes did burn,
as she watched them walk out the door

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Burning Desire"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
Outstanding write Christine
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 4, 2010
Great images ! Its hard to watch a lost love with someone else tho!!!....M

Reviewed on July 1, 2010
What a beautiful visual Christine
How many of us have danced with
Another in our hearts and our mind
...all of us
Love Waltz...sashayazzzzzzzz in
Vickie

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
Christine, I felt like that was me in your poem. I stole a hottie on the dance floor my senior prom. His date wanted to beat me up after our passionate dance. This poem is romantic, and heartfelt. Take care my friend. ~Chessly

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2010
such heart felt romance...loved it .. :) neerja

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Very emotionally felt and wonderfully written to make a heart swell with love and admiration of such a poetic masterpiece...

I love this!!!!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
You take a passing admiration that bit further, Christine, so that it seems that your subject is not just deeply smitten but struck with the sudden conviction that this is "meant to be". These things are very strange and who knows, maybe a premonition of what's a bit further down the road - nothing to feel "guilty" about, just a fore-knowing without any intervention on her part... Well, at least I have tried to put another kind of spin onto this heart-swelling longing! :)) Very well constructed and emotionally acute. xx

Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Christine:

This was very romantic!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Awesome! Great fantasy she enjoyed! Great ending! Loved it...

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Didn't expect that ending.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Don't know about you girls, but we, the "stronger" sex have lived through it all our lives!

Georg


Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Desire for one who is with another.
Don't you just loath that when it occurs. Such a weird pain accompanied by guilt.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Christine, this is written so beautifully..and I was was so surprised by your ending.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Ah, desire and unrequited love...the pain and frustration well handled, Christine, in this fine piece of writing.

John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
ouch! poigtnant write!

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Dear Christine,this is a very nice description of a spontaneous and natural love, Thanks for sharing, Love Emile

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
EXCELLENT! 'BURNING DESIRE' RETURNS TO THE 'REALITY' OF....IT'S NEVER GOING TO HAPPEN. A UNIQUE WORK...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
oh my, you captured the essence of vicarious longing beautifully ...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
So very sad, sounds a little bit country mood in here. Great write Christine.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Sounds a little too familiar, Angel. Well written.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Desires go unfulfilled many times in life but when it comes your way all will be fulfilled and no more yearning will you know or desire.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
To bad it had to end that way. The piece was well crafted with the surprise ending.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Definately hot on the dance floor but surprize ending....
fee

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Oh, this poem has left me breathless and I do so resonate with it!!!!!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Beautifully done, and the ending speaks for the poem.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Nice pen at work here...surprise ending.

Cheers,
Dan


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