Dawn, Poetry at its finest. The last two lines brought it all home. Excellence. Lisa
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
MASTERFUL work, Dawn! I love this form of poetry...HERE the form is more IMPORTANT than STRUCTURE...and I love how you progress in each line...BRILLIANT poem, Poet!
This is a perfect poetic dance of such intensity and depth, Dawn. The balance and the rhythm are superb and the seed of truth and pearls of wisdom you "crack open" are most beautiful. You take us into the central crux and out again wonderfully. This is a real gem of a write - am keeping! Thank you. Kate xx
In a post-coup America, an Illinois farm boy is drawn into the resistance by his brother's death. Captured, he is given a choice: betray his friends, or the girl he loves will be lobotomized.
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Debs