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Elephant Toes
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what category is this? I don't know. I'm sure it's not mainstream... bored trying to sleep after a few days wide awake. facts about Hannibal are probably all wrong... somebody correct me please. too delirious to look it up right now. ;) ps. i also just realized that elephants don't have toes. so chalk this one up as a lost cause.


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Rising, rounded and pale,
barely visible among the far peaks
and folds of a comforted quilt,
curled line of five toes presses
against the       

               sloping angle
formed by counterweight
of covered digits
equal in proportion
if mirrored opposite.


Hidden by snows of warmth,
beneath an uneven patchwork
of forest green, winter white,
wiggling spirits long to trumpet
a warning.        

               Heeding echoes
from below, ivory big toe
slows, then stops steady
progress momentarily,
sensing danger ahead.


But yielding to mastermind
of epic challenge, each toe bends
at the joint, inching forward
like elephant ballerinas
gliding over

               the
Himalayas following
Hannibal (it’s all in her head) as his
massive ego, dreams of grandeur,
and ravenous desire for immortality
drive him to
Rome.


Top to bottom, head to tail,
I watch artful appendages move
gracefully forward as if unaware
of certain doom. Do they know,
(if
Hannibal in my mind

               does not tell them so)
,
that a deep sleep of historic proportion
awaits them on the other side of this
march through darkness toward the
snowy oblivion of dreams to come?



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 Reviews of "Elephant Toes"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
A fine imaginative creation, Dawn. Thank you for sharing this offering with us. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
WOW!!!… This is one really creative write, Poet!!!… Outstanding vivid imagery, Dawn!!!… Excellent job!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
well written metamorphic journey with some wonderul images ... history loves to trample over itself, doesn't it ...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
wonderful poem reguardless
that's what makes it so well-done
creativity isn't it great!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Very creative, your imagination enhanced the reality
made it a lively poem,it doesn't need correctness!

Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Suffering from insomnia can lead to all kinds of imaginations. Wonderful metaphors with this one.

~ Sandie May Angel ~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
Dawn,
WOW!!! this is quite good. Who said, " Elephants don't have toes?"


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