Dawn, you captured and expressed such deep emotion...love lost, love gone bad...the pain and desolation. I like the way you use rain, tree, nature...
Excellent.
Gina
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Just as life during the pandemic was color-coded with different hues representing different levels of danger, life in its aftermath has become shaded in similar ways. As a self-styled “Seeker of Beauty with Beauty,” (borrowing from a quote by W.E.B.
Allen
Excellent.
Gina
Wonderfully written..
Peter
done in this magical poem! A real treat!;-)