Dawn, your verses saturate the mind and heart of the readers. All of them extremely well penned and each of them placed their own mark.
Very well done!
Lisa
Reviewed by Tyrone Banks (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
This piece does embody the waves of emotion that many of us experience. It's hard to keep above water somethimes as problems weigh you down - yet the tide can sometimes heave and carry you to safety. I really enjoyed this poem!
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Five years have passed. The sequel to the award-winning Chapel of Eternal Love, this book revisits the same couples in the first book, and where the lives have taken them since they left the altar at The Chapel of Eternal Love
you write with such clarity, passion, and brevity!
beautiful!
ty, Dani
Very well done!
Lisa
Tyrone
Love Tinka
Reindeer
Carmen :-)
Peter
A masterpiece of sorrow!I hope your plea has been heard!