Sad eyes refuse to bear false witness to who she was. They remain protected behind many-colored masks she wears. She has become a ghost, haunted by visions of her former self.
She is the nested Babushka doll heart hollowed out, bottled up inside the replica of the replica of her shrinking self, original soon to be mere remembrance.
Her mind has lost its grasp on details: how the unraveling occurred and when it first began. There is a face, his face, and eyes that refused to tell anything but truth to her.
In a deeper place she understands; better part of her has gone with him, and while she prays, longs for his return, she knows life offers no guarantee, has taken its toll on her.
I'm stunned by your superb insightful poetry, Dawn.
I just pray that you will remember that YOU are the best part of yourself! No one can take that place. Don't cede any part of you
to someone else, God wants you whole ! You will function best when you make up your mind to determine that you are the sole control of your anatomy! You are so strong now imagine how much stonger when you take full control! Sorry I could'nt help myself;-)Love to you ...Eileen
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
The deep-dive literary meditations presented as stories, poems, and essays in The American Poet Who Went Home Again, A Mosaic of My Soul at Work, have captivated and inspired readers ever since its first paperback publication in 2008.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Carmen :-)
you get into the heart of the poet and squeeze the emotions right out--heartbreaking and brilliant writing! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *hope you're okay*
I just pray that you will remember that YOU are the best part of yourself! No one can take that place. Don't cede any part of you
to someone else, God wants you whole ! You will function best when you make up your mind to determine that you are the sole control of your anatomy! You are so strong now imagine how much stonger when you take full control! Sorry I could'nt help myself;-)Love to you ...Eileen
Sorrow is part of love and my
question is Why?
Tugs at your heart strings...
Peter
Sad but good!!
Love Tinka
Top class write.
ty, Dani