Just Another Page (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

Although this write is well done and you capture your topic as it should be...but I come away with this feeling that I want to console and encourage the subject for nothing is ever "just another page"...each is fresh and new and besides too early in "08" to be disenchated. LOL Think you just need a dose of spring snuggles.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

but to better life is my own responsibility

I think a very profound lesson for us all.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

LOL, so true, and we'll be just as all dopey next year..
We all have Pooh thoughts and hopes, acting like the bouncey excited Tigger, within a week, we become Eyore once more...

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

We always get the greatest reaction to expectations when our perceived realities were not actual. It bites us all. Very well written and thouht out poem. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

so much truth to this--i can sure relate!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Believe in yourself and you'll do oh great!
stay safe
Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

burdened the New Year to bring serenity
expected it to keep my demons away
but to better life is my own responsibility
to arrange my cards as they’d been dealt to play

There is wisdom in your verses, Rebecca. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Your pen dipped in wisdom ink to write this one Becca!The old saying "we live and learn" but oh how it sometimes hurts;-)

luv,
et

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Excellent write, Rebecca; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

...continue to turn the pages...until one...becomes you...turning dreams into reality.
well done...
John

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

I always liked the addage-" Carpe diem -Seize the day or harvest the day. Setting a goal at least gives us something to shoot for. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Basically and truthfully it is just that, Rebecca, but it is what is in your heart, in your soul, in your psyche which determine what the so-called new year will bring . . . You CANNOT sit back and wait for those things you have wished for to come to you, hat in hand . . . You must kick down some doors and close others . . . Within those acts you will find what you wished for . . .

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Excellent write, Rebecca, very well penned. Feel like this a lot...but up to us to change. We are in charge of our destinies...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Great write!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

Excellent write Becca
Yes you said it another day flying in the wind
to meet the past, yet the future still looks bleek
Until it becomes the "now"
Peace & love be with you

William