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aquarius moon
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they don’t understand people

who won’t function from the heart

nor do they wish to


subhuman behaviors

fade and distract their integrity

of divinity and otherworldly views


isolation, retreat, separation


conflicted how to ground

distant by choice, yet…

wanting to connect


the purposeful act of light

purges pockets of dark matter

cycling repetitive frustration

with the inhumanity of it all

 



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 Reviews of "aquarius moon"
Reviewed by Myra Darwish
Reviewed on October 1, 2014
You expressed the energy of the Aquarian Moon very well: the challenge of attachment, the intellectual approach to emotions, the fixity of their experience...and the humanitarian thrust of their way of being. Very creative!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 1, 2014
connection is difficult with subhuman behavior and ideology ....

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 28, 2014

enjoyed the read!!


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 28, 2014
While I read several times, I'm not sure who the "they" are you are writing about. The title suggests that the poem is about something Aquarian or "enlightening." But I'm sorry, I was not enlightened. I see that others were greatly so. They must have more insight than I.

Ron

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on May 28, 2014
wow. your poem speaks to me as introversion. i love it.

Reviewed on May 27, 2014
A thought-provoking poem! It is said that the human's behavior is somehow connected with the stars and the moon, and is governed by them in which how the humans would act and feel.

However, I don't think it's necessary for anyone to understand everyone though, for the human's behavior varies. In order to understand all human's behavior you'll need to be a psychiatrist; but even so, there have been many professionals who had failed to understand the human's behavior.

I think all one needs to do is to manage one's OWN life, and make good of himself/herself. There is no need to worry about others unless they are directly relating to us; or that perhaps they are truly in need of someone else's support and understanding.

Sandie :o)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 27, 2014
A thought-inciting poem, Debby. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 27, 2014
Pretty cool write, Deb, nicely done.
Cheers,
Dan


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