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Spilling Virginal Oils
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I See You...

Spilling Virginal Oils those empty cocoons have their own silent beauty as the warm river rocks bathe her secrets she opens her pearlescent charm succulent and savory mysteries that intoxicate innate senses perfuming the sun kissed zephyrs with her fragrant passion she casts her intimate spell on her dancing fingertips caressing and tracing messages within the privacy of our thoughts writing love letters with desirous fires she burns the edges of every seductive fantasy lighting candles among sensual incense and spilling virginal oils she scoops up the pearls of the sea spilling the nectars of her soul as she shows me the wings of her heart anointed by a soft spoken alluring whisper I see the jewels of her ambiance shine while the rainbows paint her charismatic smile… Poetry Chronicles: Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on June 13, 2013

Victoria's secret. The eyes, those enticing eyes brings the ship up to her.... Where they proclaim her fragrant flowers from the field.

The spell, the broken spell where illuminated souls whisper heart to heart bringing them in union. Bodies from prison released from the prison of words and speech.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on June 12, 2013

I see the jewels of her ambiance shine, What a gorgeous line. Your poetry is loaded with ambiance. I am referring to all of your writings. First Rate, My Dear.

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Lush imagery...that makes reader's heart skip
a beat...thrills that coax delighted blushes
into his/her cheeks...induces...the smell of fragrant
passion...Have every fantasy.
Great poem, Victoria. Thank you for sharing.
With warm regards Isabella.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

Truly portrays her Ambiance
adding Much More than just
charismatic flavor with
magic of magnetism

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Oh to be captured in her spell! Enticing, seductive! Fascinating words from a fascinating poet!

Peace,

Dayvid

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Basalt rocks layered in a single line on my chest through the canyon and down to my pudenda fine grains of sand you write upon me poetry coming in trickles inside your tight-closed fist releasing it on me at just the right intervals gritty sex mingling with glistening pearls of the sea residue tell-tell at the corners of your mouth anointing your lips with the spilling wiping my vertical smile until I subside orgasm's release. You spilled it I See You did...

Love's Whisper & Sand Etchings
Yours xoxo

Reviewed by Paul Berube

A most enchanting and provocative offering, my friend. But then, what else could we expect from one as enchanting as you?

Reviewed by George Carroll

You know how to weave your words around the readers heart.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

I haven't got a ghost of an idea what you are writing about but it is sexy as hell.

Sunrise? Jerry has much more insight than I do.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

she has a wonderous beauty indeed
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Yes indeed, you have been privy to the mystical and wondrous beauty of a gentle sunrise and all that it beholds. Beautiful wordplay, my friend.