Blank Canvas (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

Beautifully said!
Sheila

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

Isn't it so that we wish to paint a few spots of our past and create them again...maybe even some wish they could paint their whole life again...

just as your poem expresses...

nice work, dawn...

enjoyed, Art Sun...

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

Beautiful poem about life's regrets.
Cryssa

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on February 6, 2008

i think we all try and do that at some point in our lives, yet it is the willingness to accept change and acknowledgement of better pictures to paint is what helps us continue on.

randy

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 6, 2008

Oh, my - this is powerfully penned wistfulness (spelling?) ... unfortunately, we only get one go 'round. Well done, Dawn, indeed.

(((HUGS)) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

All the pastel colors that light our path on this journey of life bring out the collective beauty in all, very inspirational.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

I am adopting this poem as my number one living aid. What is your price for my using it? This is ultra concise, full blown, abject, specific, and all those words that flood my brain. How did you know me so well? And, how kind you are! - Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Excellent metaphor! You captured the canvas well,how often we look back and wish we could at least add a different hue to some of our own strokes...

luv
et

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Dawn this is a wonderful piece,,,and how many times would we like to go back and repaint a picture?? live and learn.
Christine

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Brilliance. The message: Live now, don't wait for life to start, it has started. Yet at any age one must keep moving forwards and upwards, enjoy life, not the superficial, but God's life...
The past is history....

Reviewed by L Hippler

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Another one that just about everyone can identify with, Dawn.
And once again you nailed it.
Larry

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

A sad write so true for so many--it is never too late to pick up the pieces but the past can never be re-done--i would sure change some things!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Ah . . . If you didn't write this about me, you should have, Dawn . . . Brave New Words here . . .

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Dawn,

Hopefully those brush strokes become productive. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.