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Credence
by Dawn Anderson → (All Poetry by Dawn Anderson)
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I wrote this for one of my students...


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Struggling

For acceptance -

Longing to fit in – Fish

Out of water – trapped between here –

And there

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Credence"
Reviewed by Patricia Sanders
Reviewed on April 10, 2008
I have been there

Reviewed on April 7, 2008
Between the rock and the hard surface. A terrible place to be.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 2, 2008
Ihave to agree with Karen V as I know what it was like to be there . Thank you for sharing Dawn.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Betwixt a rock and a hard place - effectively penned - well done, Dawn!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
so very true for so many--a tough place to be

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Beautiful, colorful photograph! One day to find a nitch where one fits in, at that tiem all will blossom in ful.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
A lovely write that characterizes many a young child, I imagine.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
what a great write,hope your student appreciate the fine effort,really good ending
stan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Will with your combintion of beauty, charm and intelligeence I am sure you will find your perfect spot pretty fast Dawn. Well done.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Good writing
Fits a lot of people.
Somehow, I doubt it's you.
With so much going for you,
How could it be?
- Bill

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Wow...this is poetry at it's best!!

Short but oh so powerful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
The fringe element artists & such()find this easy to understand _ evol .~. Ted

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Massive and powerful is this poem metaphor . . .

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
I love these words and this poem... so aptly describes SO many....
Definitely describes feelings I have had so many times...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
SO many thoughts come to mind here...What a great message to pass onto one who may be feeling, "left out"
...Some of the most beautiful flowers go unnoticed, and so many fish flap around on their docks, searching for those waters that once helped them swim, but too desperate to find the right airs!
I could go on and on...:)
Love it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
May this fish find its water and swim freely.....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 31, 2008
Longing to fit in - how so many long for that. And what a graphic!


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