Self-Seeking (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 14, 2008

Like being lost in a foggy mist

Love & Peace be with you
William

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 10, 2008

Deeply sad... the lengths some people will go to, to be believed...
and they think it is to protect themselves, when really they are losing SO much more and hurting themselves deeply by losing the trust of all of those around them...

You penned truth that cuts deeply with these words.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

This is so real. Some people would go on to tell lies until they convice themselves it is true, when everyone knows it's a lie.

I love this write! Thank you for taking the time to read and commenting on my work!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by L Hippler

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

All too true, the picture you paint.
And a wonderful pic you have with it.
Larry

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Picture and poem both amazing, thank you for your review on my poem "Little Gifts"
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Man is born to save self and has a tendency from youth to lie. Truth is brought forth of genuine love for others and not the selfserving of self�beautifully written.

Allen

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

This is really real about some people.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

I feel healing going on. Excellent write. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

so well said--i know such folks--it is very sad

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

I believe a theif can only steal from you while a liar is capable of hanging you. In order to be a good liar one has to remember what they have said before as I have found people trap themselves between lost lies. Thank you for sharing Dawn.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

A liar is a liar regardless of how you hear them and they'll repeatedly tell one after another. An interesting well worded writing.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Vividly penned - excellent, Dawn.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Realism at it's strongest. That is always the way with a lie...they seem to breed only more dishonesty.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Yes, I wrote something similar entitled "Image and Illusion" several months ago - we share the same idea. Beautiful photo. Nice writing.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Living a lie in six lines. And, Dawn, perfect lines at that. - Gene.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Lie on top of lie,, creates a pile that can no longer be hidden,, some just lie to themselves. so sad

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

One lie usually does lead to another - quite profound.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Beatiful and poignant, a lie breeds more lies because you always have to back up the lie with something---which is also another lie....

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

This is such a true account of lots of people nowadays. I was taught that one's word is one's honor. Now people use and twist words until they forget what they've said--and certainly don't know who they are.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Lies beget lies, beget lies . . .

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

evolving at a different pace all to common .~. evol Ted

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

gentle words that bite and bite well
John

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Dawn,

Have seen this time and time again. One lie grows into so many more and what started out as small ends up hurting many people. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

TRUTH, SAD AND VERY NICE!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

...this wonderful piece of poetry...is full of truth.
great write here Dawn...
John