Drifting (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Such a beautiful moment!

Reviewed on August 18, 2010

Great description of the moments of being we all need if we are to be complete. In our greatest travail, we cry out, and the answer comes, "Be still, and know that I am God."........Jerry

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 31, 2010

They say wisdom comes in those moments. Intense mood in this poem, Dawn.
Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 30, 2010

Ah yes... ...every soul needs such moments, Dawn. Very effectively shared; truly evocative. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on July 28, 2010

Dawn - I feel as if I'm gently floating on the ocean surface into the stillness of your words. - David

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on July 25, 2010

The ocean can hold one within a reflection of thoughts unknown even to the viewer themselves...

ice work Dawn..

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

SOUNDS LIKE A GOOD 'PLACE IN TIME' TO DRIFT INTO...EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANK YOU DAWN FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

Simply beautiful; beautifully simple. I love the notion of "a moment unconnected to time."

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

"only stillness" how perfect is the moment, the words, the view, all as one...it's where we lose ourselves to find ourselves, Dawn.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Sounds like a lull in the busy throroughfare of life that you well deserve...loved it.
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Such are the moments I treasure, Dawn. In gratitude, gene.

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

I always wonder... is it possible to really think of nothing?

Cryssa

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

beautiful in all ways

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Dawn,

Sometimes it's best just to think of nothing and enjoy life's beauty. Beautifully written, and I love the ocean scenery.

Mary

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

The stillness of solitude..a place where I love to dwell. Remember the song "In the Still of the night"..the melody came into my head as I read your poem..lovely work as always..
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Where I need to be ... beautiful, Dawn. So relaxing ...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

I love when nothing else exists, peacful beauty Dawn!

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

I love these shorty poems! Beaauuuuuutiful Dawn.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Dawn, your lovely poem describes exactly how I feel when I go for my morning walk. I feel at one with myself and the world around me with no intrustion of bothersome thoughts.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Mystical and deep in content.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

sounds lovely to me!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Beautiful Dawn
~ This possesses such power between one word and the next ~
everything blending together ~ pure
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Well Penned Dawn
Those are moments that we all search for
once in a while enjoying them
for they are rare and never lasting......
a wonderful write
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Such stillness can be marvelous; I wish I had more moments like that.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

You have always been the sort of poet that can condense your thoughts to the most simplest of terms and still the poem is profound. This is yet one more bit of proof of that. To delve into the void of which you so eloquently speak is proof the mind has the tremendous ability to restart itself.

Reviewed by David Maclellan

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Dawn, I don't know if we are on the same page, but these words to me describe the beauty of solitude...lost by choice, in a world of your own
warmest regards,
David