Screaming Eyes (Inspired by Jay Chattin) (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 18, 2002

>>>chills < < < up and down my spine...yipe. INtense!! the pic's gon' give me nightmares for nights to come...thanks a lot! :0 EXCELLENT, WELL DONE! "it musta been those chilidogs you ate before bedtime" is what my daddy used to say when i'd have a bad dream...(((HUGS))) and pleasant dreams, marilyn! love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on July 7, 2002

Bad dream, dramatic images, good writing

Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2002

deep intensity that offers sympathy to the receiever of this vision.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 2, 2002

brrrrr.......;0)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 26, 2002

Spooky, vivid write. Congrats to you and Jay (for inspiring it). Well done.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

Wow, such vivid and dark imagery!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Chilly! wonderful write.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Wow! This was awesome write, Marilyn!!!!!!! I liked this a lot!!!!!

Dreams are terrible sometimes, but I'm glad you can write it out.

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

WOW EXCEPTIONALLY WRITTEN, Haunting dream!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

vividly powerful!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Vividly expressed! Wow--intense write!!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Hope you'll never have such dreams again. Think of beautiful scenes.

Reviewed by lovechild

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Wow what an image!! No thank you may sleep with the lights on then again......wonderfully done

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

My sins as crows..yikes, that visual alone has me rethinking the confessional!
Josie

Reviewed by Energy Shifter (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Where there is darkness there is also light

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Excellent write... the darkside..dont you just hate those haunting dreams.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

Shudders, I hate those kind of dreams...
Love and Light
dreamweaver

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

Terrible dream, hope you have many nice ones in the future.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

I do not believe I would like to experience those kind of nightmares...that is too real..An excellent job in your description and the pic matches as well

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

Whoa...what a horrific dream Marilyn...glad it turned into a knock-out poem, this is fantastic...;-) see it's true good can come from bad...Please no more
nightmates...;-)

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

A scary dream sweetie! wow! lol Great write, but spooky! lol
Tiana ;-p

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

Good write, Marilyn.

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2002

What a horrendous dream!! I suffer from nightmares too, and sympathize with anyone else who wakes up in a cold sweat. Great write.

Scada