Butterfly ~ (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 14, 2013

I look back and see how you would tell a story with that crazed nearly haphazard flight that would take me away...I love being there

Reviewed by Debbie Lacy

Reviewed on October 6, 2012

Beautiful and I love the pretty picture image as well! Again thanks for the share!

Debbie

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 26, 2009

So pretty and delightful. Enjoy your pen...
Thanks for sharing

Dale

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on March 26, 2009

Marilyn:

This is such a lovely write! I don't know why I hadn't seen this before.

Welcome back to AD!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk

Reviewed on March 26, 2009

Butterfly, an exceptional piece.

God Bless You,
Mariann

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on November 15, 2005

When I am finished I
tickle its softness
with my delicate feet
to give a last call for
all to greet the sun .... l o v e i t. Butterflies are delightful,
and so is your colorful and slyly witty and succulent offering
to them. . (: and us :) 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

This has the lightness of a whisper, the beauty of a pageant and the finesse of a work of art as it moves effortlessly from stanza to stanza. I love the sense of innocence and yet sensuality, too. A lovely write, Marilyn, thank you. Kate x

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 19, 2003

well done

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

I love to welcome the sun every morning I see it, or even a little rain once in a while. Lovely uplifting write Marilyn. Thanks always for your comments. Your a dear Lady.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

a very beautiful, uplifting poem! rejuvenated my synapses...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Music, image and wonderful orchestration of words all come together to form a piece of perfection. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Augh sweet Miss Seray...I speak to the Monarchs and their voice comes back inside of your poetry. The poor Monarchs are surely doomed with the foretell of colder weather coming to their home south of the US. I read of this just yesterday. My heart is full with the flutter of their wings and the struggle they will endure. Your words are strength. Thank you.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2003

Lovely soft write dear... Please do more! ;0

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Marilyn, this is surely the nicest poem that I've read tonight. BTW, I love your autumn colors on your bio-page. It really puts me in the mood for that harvest moon.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Lovely imageries indeed!...and I love the butterfly in the picture.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2003

“Wake up sleepy heads”
Indeed you have woken me up with this piece..wonderfully written ty

Vesna

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Marilyn this is exceptional...I adore butterflys and have many flowers that draw them into my garden.....this was beautiful...floria

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Absolutely adorable, Marilyn.. Glad to see you back. (means pc is worling well again right?)
Glad info was useful..
Hugs
Jenni

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

This poem absolutely flutters on wings of delight!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

"a lighter kiss than us" Ahhhh, Marilyn, I floated right into this, left the room, soared! How could anyone not fly when reading this, a complete 'smile' of a poem. I'm a bit giddy.. feels wonderful! Thank you for this. katy.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 18, 2003

Lovely and a good reminder not to take small things for granted. thanks GEM

Reviewed by Buddy Angel

Reviewed on May 16, 2003

What a glorious write

Buddy

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on May 16, 2003

M'lady Marilyn, this poem may well rival all others for soul touching beauty, in words and art!

Brilliant write :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

This was so lovely! I loved this wonderful poem so much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Oh Marilyn, this is wonderful. So soft and descriptive, made me wish I could fly!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Whimsical, magical, enchanting and a delight to read. This is gorgeous, Marilyn.
Chrissie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Sooooooooo beautiful Marilyn....you've a rare gift indeed.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Truly a masterpiece.

Reviewed by Patrick Talty

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Dear Marilyn,
I read this poem several times to delight again and again in the appreciation of its theme, your approach to the writing of it, and how the thought, feeling, verse form all join to form a singular richness of impact.

I don't know whether you intended the poem to be read on more than one level. For me, though, it DOES operate on the levels of the literal and the symbolic.

The free verse form is perfect for the work and, all in all, I would classify this as a poem of simple elegance which, like all good poetry, evokes thoughts, feelings and emotions similar (I imagine) to those which inspired it.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Marilyn...this is a lovely write - very whimsical and full of delight. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Absolutley beautiful Marilyn!!
A pure delight!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Every day is a beautiful day. Fine work.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Now this write was an absolute delight to read! Loved it! :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Excellent poetry.

Reviewed by Linda Murray

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Butterful romance, I just love it. A very unique concept. So romantic a kiss lighter than us.!!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Very outstanding sweet write...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Absolutley beautiful Marilyn
excellent

William

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Beautiful. I personally think if you aren't happy to see the sun come up each and every day, there is something seriously wrong with your life. Bravo on a fine work.

Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

I can watch them forever, so beautiful and fragile, this was one terrific write that left me feeling good with memories of my own. Well done.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

I love butterflies! This is beautiful Marilyn.
Jack

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Wonderful imagery in this ... butterflies are amazing creatures!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

This gives the reader the feeling of flight. Great write.