You are like the clouds that clothe my sky Sometimes white as snow At times, a menacing grey that threaten to release its fury... I am frightened of you Yet I feel sad when I do not see you.
As I raise my face to the heavens I watch that white purity start to darken. One by one, Heavy drops of rain starts falling Pounding on me Blinding me Driving me to my knees.
My mind willed for my old friend to come And give me warmth To be shown again that little whirlpool To behold once again the beauty that only you can make me see: Indeed, there is a still pool in the middle of the rushing whirlpool!
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Reviews of "Whirlpool"
Reviewed by T. Schwimmer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
I can sense a sadness in the lines, and as I go deeper, there is a yearning of freedom from pain. Powerful words.
Best wishes,
Tanya
Reviewed by Andrew Grover (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Beautiful flow of imagery. I can almost feel the heavy drops of rain, and the yearning for tranquility. Well done, Sheri.
Imagery and metaphors galore and enjoyed. The depth of your soul shines through. Complex and conflicting emotions. Liz
Reviewed by Marigold Johnson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2007
You have captivated my thoughts with this one, Sheri. There is always light and hope at the end of every suffering. As always, this one is written with so much meanings.
I am frightened of you
Yet I feel sad when I do not see you.
Indeed this is such a common theme in this chaotic world/life, Sheri. I can relate to the feelings that you express via your verses here. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,
Beautifully written and expressed poetic thoughts
of this heavy drops of falling rain but
as my eyes dance from top to bottom
Of this page I felt a sincere yearning for the one
That warms your heart and soul
Absolutely beautiful!
outstanding write!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star
There is more than the rain and pool within your poem...there is the yearn for the One who comforts and warms the very heart...the friend of old who cares and shows beauty even when the rain pours from darkened skies...
It's a beautiful poem. Please keep writing more of what you feel deep in your heart. Let out that latent talent that has been hidden for long. GodBless!
Potential meets purpose for great accomplishments in the life of a young student.
A young student is interested in learning coding programs. He applies and is rejected because of his age. He does not give up and tries again and is accepted. Eventu
I have written a chapter called I Am That, I Am in this inspirational compilation book by best-selling authors and wonderful people from all walks of life xox :-D (Its sister book is called Adventures In Manifesting - Success and Spirituality)
Share
Print
Save
Follow
Best wishes,
Tanya
Yours,
AJGrover
In Christ,
MNJ
Yet I feel sad when I do not see you.
Indeed this is such a common theme in this chaotic world/life, Sheri. I can relate to the feelings that you express via your verses here. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,
Regis
of this heavy drops of falling rain but
as my eyes dance from top to bottom
Of this page I felt a sincere yearning for the one
That warms your heart and soul
Absolutely beautiful!
outstanding write!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star
God Bless
Michelle~
Be safe,
Karen
the willing mind and the purity of heart...
nice work...
Art Sun...
Beautifully expressed and imaged poetry; well done!
Welcome to AD, you're among friends.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Regino