at midnight
reaching to
kill the light
my hand withdrew
as if sliced
clear-clean-through
skin and vessel
severed forever
by the moon
leaking in through
the open blinds.
i gripped
my wrist
free hand tight
to the wound
not wanting to bleed
myself too completely
as i was acutely
reminded of you
and those same lines
cutting into your chest
when last we meshed.
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
"not wanting to bleed
myself too completely
as i was acutely
reminded of you"
-in being able to empath the cuts, and live.
this rings of having been there to effectively convey the emotion and drama--BRAVA! most excellent write! compelling and vividly imaged!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.