jigsaw sky
you say i stole from you
and if so, may i ask
where is it that i hid
this cloud formation,
this dream you had,
of happily ever afters?
beyond our romantic,
purely ridiculous notions,
lies our unique perspective
on our futures taking shape,
yours looking like a rabbit,
mine a sleeping dog lying.
i could no more steal
the clouds from the sky
than i could the songs
that live in your heart,
for it is merely clotted anger
that has stolen your voice.
a no-win, this situation,
for who am i to say
that given the right timing
you too will find the pieces
to create the bigger picture
in the shape of your dreams.
g~
you write with style, and POWER--very vivid and intense
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla.
especially enjoyed
"...i could no more steal
the clouds from the sky
than i could the songs
that live in your heart,
for it is merely clotted anger
that has stolen your voice..."
"clotted anger"...what a line! wish i'd thought of it! *BRAVA!*
I do have one tiny problem, though, I admit, and it's mine - I strenuously object to small 'i'. ;)