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Confiding In the Walls
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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I saw this adorable picture of Michael and this poem came through. Michael will learn much from talking to those walls.


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Confiding In the Walls


Here he is just standing there so quiet and so small,
He looks like he is whispering and confiding in the wall.
Wish I could hear his whispers; wish that walls could speak.
Would I want to hear it or would I be too meek.


Does the naughty thing he did justify his fate?
Will he realize what he did or will he be irate?
He is now confiding, in the wall in front of him,
Telling it the things he feels and how things looks so grim.


If he only knew how hard it is, to punish him like this,
When all I really want to do is give him hugs or kiss.
But he must learn some lessons to help him out in life,
He must be respectful to get him through the strife.


I’d gladly take his punishments but he would never learn,
To be the man that he can be, I must be very stern.
The walls are now his confidant, hearing much more than I.
Was the punishment worth it, when I was the only one who
cried?


 


Written for Michael, who was being punished & put in a corner.


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 Reviews of "Confiding In the Walls"
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Bonnie,

Perfect pic and poem - one terrific write my dear friend!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
...wonderful pen...of remembrance to one...myself...perhaps the language of walls.
excellent poem Bonnie...
John

Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Bonnie,

This one is adorable! Having spent a few times at the wall myself...LOL Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
The innocent beauty of kids whims, but life is learned from its errors. He must be reciting lessons for his own journal. Enjoyed


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