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Would You Love Me?
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Have you ever asked this question?


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Would You Love Me?
 
 
Would you love me if I was gorgeous, and had a beautiful face?
Would you love me if I was exciting as an astronaut in space?
Would you love me if I had a body like a Greek Goddess of the past?
Would you love me if I was rich and for an eternity it would last?
 
If that’s all you would love about me,
Then I must set you free.
And I’m afraid I could never love someone,
For not seeing my loving heart, the best part of me.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May

 

 

 


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Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Am I qualified if I had to check "All of the Above"? Ahemmmmm LOL Count me glad that I'm not young in this "plastic" world of today. You did well in poetizing this dilemma, Bonnie!
Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
a wonderful write--

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
You turned that one upside down! Very nice Bonnie!
This is what every girl and boy should be taught!

ET

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Bonnie, this is full of truth and honesty...many love from the looks on the outside and not what's in the soul of the person. This is great!

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Well...(I know...it's a deep subject) I must admit that I often measure myself against those standards and find myself quite lacking...which makes me wonder why my husband loves me so much, but then I realize he is one in a million and he must see something that I don't see on the outside. And...in the end I am grateful for that!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
A poem right on target for today's societal trends. Humanity and respect have little to do with choosing companions. --A sad state of things, I must say. -- I can't help but think of that movie, "Shallow Hal"... wouldn't it be wonderful if our character was seen as a physical attribute? But better yet... and on second thought... isn't it better this way... that those that get the real gems are those who dig for it?

A fine poem. --Charlie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Would you love me if I was a solitary thorns bush?

Georg

Reviewed by Jordan Dobrowski (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Ma'ma I love this!!! This is very true that people tend to "fall in love" with things like looks and money when in reality our looks and what we have in out wallet is not who we are but it is the love in our heart.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
I like this one. Of course I would love the person if they were not beautiful. I look for what's inside the person's heart and all and then judge to love them or not, but I do make lots of friends and like this poem very good. Another good shot for you.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
The exterior fades but the love that's inside last a life time.

Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Spot on perfection, Bonnie, it's what's inside that counts! Wish the rest of society would realize what you pen in powerful lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
To see ones heart is a Blessing.,, we have to just look.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 18, 2008
Bonnie,
BRAVO!!! Excellent poem and a must read for all men AND women. I've shouted this all my life, ITS THE HEART, not a bank account, or a gorgeous face, or a mansion, BUT WHATS IN THE HEART that really counts. When you marry for other reasons it don't last. Thank you my friend, for putting it into words! Love this!

Love, Linda


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