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Beneath the Surface
by Tracey L Hardie → (All Poetry by Tracey L Hardie)
  
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Beneath the Surface


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Within deformities
of past mistakes
I bleed silently
into a bottomless hell.

My challise of animosity
filled with venom,
I savor its flavor
between lips of loath.

Thick and full it sears,
scorching with flames
to visions of insight,
revolutionizing my device.

Upon my fingertips
rest the fate of life
to the brave soul willing
to take a tarnished bite.


Copyright 2003 Tracey L. Hardie


(Written to a poetry picture challenge.)

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 Reviews of "Beneath the Surface"
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
Tracey,
Very Gothic! and Very Cool! I am glad it is about the picutre you posted, I almost thought it was about me! lol! Only kidding, I cannot write to pictures, you and Ed are very good at it, and I love the last lines!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
Excellent noir poem.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
Tracey...wonderful write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
Tracey, dark and turgid but briliant also. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
Good one my friend.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
Tracey,
Bravo!! this is excellent for the challenge.
"Upon my fingertips
rest the fate of life
to the brave soul willing
to take a tarnished bite."
Powerful imagery
Peg


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