'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
thrives on the feast
of pleading innocent cries.
Teacup eyes
quiver with anguish,
it is no surprise
to her battered smile.
Nightmares
finger-paint
abstract impalements;
[as her mother hides]*.
Tomorrow's grave
entombed chilled cries
to whispered silent sighs.
* Doesn't fit!
Next time I will make a comment re 'sound'.
Love from India - Joel -
This stanza...
"Nightmares
finger-painted
abstracted impalements,
her mother hides."
Is S-T-R-O-N-G!
Very haunting write!
Hugs,
Maria
Good one.
Morchuis.
this one is masterful.
"Tomorrows grave
entombed a chilled cry
to whispers
of a silent sigh. "
Peg