beautiful collab, big bro and nicely done. your first stanza reminded me of how much the river adored Narcissus for looking at her, because she was seeing her beauty through Narcissus' eyes.
Lovemaking as it should be, all wrapped up in two mirrored poems. Nicely done. It covers all the bases. But I wonder, with our hectic lives and fears of all kinds, whether this kind of lovemaking as a chance anymore. But we can dream, can we?
Ron